A rough draft
You sand it!
Because the waves keep going "shhhhhh".
In case you hadn't noticed, the color of the wind is 'blew.' Water always looks 'wet' to me. Dirt is oviously 'dirty.' Soup seems 'soupy.' If you can't find those Crayons in your box, contact CRAYOLA.
A really strong gust of wind.
Disgusting. I'll see myself out...
You need a rough draft before you have a final copy.